IMPERIAL WAR: Part 1

[AssCake]

The Karelia Front;












This is the LEGO Re-work of Part 1- Sorry if the comic is layout is bad, but its my first comic-style.

Click on the pictures, as they were turned into thumbnails.

Oh, Imperial War will be a massive comic by me, spanning probably 3 parts per front; I am doing a CoD style thing.

POSSIBLE NEXT FRONTS:
Victorian United Council's Army of the People (Victorian Army at the time of the Earth Republic)
Hungarian Empire
Peoples Army of Corellia

^^^
Just some idea for further parts. ALSO:

A sign up for here too, I had a sign up for it on SSLF.

SIGN UP:
Name: (Unit Number if your a stormie or a clone, a name like "Cody" or "Gree" if your a sergeant))
Rank: (Sergeant Most)
Class: (ER: Clone Trooper, Squad Commander (Sergeants only), Driver,
Imperials: Stormtrooper, Imperial Officer, Imperial Shocktrooper (Driver)))
Head:
Hair:
Weapon: (Rifle, SMG, Carbine, Rocket Launcher)
Bio:

[Jamit]

I found this really hard to follow. For the next comic you need a new story line. Also, mixing Star Wars LEGO and Wild West LEGO didn't work for this comic.

I look forward to seeing how much better the next part is.

+15 Bricks

[AssCake]

What?

Wild West? Where do you see wild west?

And please share how it was hard to follow? It wasnt one storyline; its a comic that follows the men on the front! All the soldiers, everybody, showing all the battles.

[Jamit]

neoexelor said:

Wild West? Where do you see wild west?

Example 1 (The Flag)
Example 2 (The Commander)

neoexelor said:

And please share how it was hard to follow? It wasnt one storyline; its a comic that follows the men on the front! All the soldiers, everybody, showing all the battles.

Normally with comics there's meant to be a story line, the people in comics should have names and backgrounds. But if that was not the point of this then that's not a bad thing. Just maybe you should think of not making it a comic/story. Just take pictures. But who cares what I think? You do what you want (sorry if that post was confusing).

[AssCake]

Nononono, you dont understand my friend, the Captains uniform is the standard Navy Uniform for the Earth Republican army

The flag, well you got me there

...its the only flag I had of that piece.