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Post by LordThrawn on Jun 27, 2005 11:21:25 GMT -5
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Post by J1A3L5 on Jun 27, 2005 12:28:35 GMT -5
Hi,
I really love how you used the scenery to do it. It looks great, because there's not really anything the eye notices that "shouldn't" be in the picture. Awesome.
I'm not completely sold on the text boxes; try making them a bit more like speech bubbles. Many programs include pre-made speech bubble patterns, or you can make your own fairly easily.
The story is also very anti-climatic. The ending is so sudden, and the reversal is very...dry? It needs a bit more flavour and excitement, I think. I liked the beginning much more than the end. Somehow, the idea of clonetroopers standing around ontop of a slightly modified AT-AT doesn't work for me. But then again, I've never been a fan of re-using official sets unless they exactly 'fit the bill'.
Great work, I'd love to see more.
-John "J1A3L5" Langrish.
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Post by Jamit on Jun 27, 2005 20:14:06 GMT -5
Almost every thing Jail said I agree with. However, I would not call it "great" because of the story line (or lack of). IMO there was no story line, so what's the point of making a comic when you could of just made a battle?
3/5 or so.
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Post by TiMaJ on Jul 7, 2005 16:45:12 GMT -5
me love it! i like the clones and i think you should make more comics!
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Post by back2murder on Jul 9, 2005 7:20:55 GMT -5
The storyline isnt that great but the comic is VERRY fun to read. i dont like the CIS wardroid but the AT-AT is verry nice redone!
GR B2M
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Post by LordThrawn on Jul 9, 2005 13:26:35 GMT -5
I just used the War Droid because it looks quite large enough to rip apart an AT-AT.
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