305L-4's Battlefield Diary

[AssCake]

Chapter I



I am the Forth trooper of the Three Hundred And Fifth legion, And this is my story.



The Z-30 fighter chases the Imperial Droid Fighter



305L-4: Gotchya...



But the fighter turns around....



And attempts a Kamikaze at at the Z-30!



It cuts a little close......



But 305L-4 makes ejects it out in time.



Indeed, just in time.



He lands on his back.



But gets up fine

305L-4: Eh, Im alright....



305L-4: Or not....

LATER, in the small outpost Z7H's interrogation room...



Imperial: Why were you in this area!?



305:-4: Im not an idiot. Im not spiling!

BY the outpost entrance



Battledroid: Roger Roger.



The door blows down, and two wookie soldiers storm in.



The imperial and droid turn



305L-4 gets up and runs towards the Officers head.



The two wookies kill off the droids, and 305L-4 kicked the officer in the head, killing him instantly.



305L-4 picks up the officers rifle.

305L-4: We have a long way to ERA territory....lets get going.


THE END

Thats it for now, this is actually from like June 1st, but I havent uploaded it.

[Jamit]

More Text = Better Story
More Time Spent On MOCs = Better Story
Better Backgrounds = Better Story

It needs some work.

[LordLlamo]

Agreed. I like the paint-job on the Scout Trooper though. The ships looked like you just smashed the geonosian fighter, JSF, and droid fighter together. The story line is also kinda dry, possibly because about 85% of the fan fictions are space/star wars.

[AssCake]

The Z-30 is the ship me friends lil bro is sending into LEGO

Then again, LEGO has low standards. They would accept something called "Ship" which is two wings with a block connecting them

[LordLlamo]

yea. so my point stands

[AssCake]

But its not my ship. He just lets me use it!

[TheQ]

No-one is trying to make you feel bad. It is just your (or your friends) creations look very much "quickies" if you allow me to use that kind of word. Add bit details for BOTH creations and story-lane and you will make wonders

Remember, more planning, better outcome ^^

-Q, "I said no sheep"

[AssCake]

Eh, my biggest *Cough* Force Rebellion *Cough* Will have much planning into it.