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Post by Thies on Apr 18, 2005 21:38:04 GMT -5
Battlefield Journal  What was supposed to be a simple scouting mission…<br>ARC-Fighter: Look sir Sheath: I see it  …turned into the thing that would take me the rest of the war to fight Sheath: It looks like a Trade Federation Fuel Station  ARC: They’re launching fighters  Sheath: Target down  ARC: I got one on my tail…can’t shake him  Sheath: Taken care of  ARC: Sir, that last one is on the run. Permission to follow  Sheath: No, get back to the Star Destroyer. I will follow it to the surface  ARC: Yes sir, General  What I found on the surface was not pretty Sheath: It’s an Invasion Force So I called my fleet down…<br>  …and soon we had an Invasion Force of our own Trooper: Alright, let’s move, let’s move. Come on Troops, pick up the pace  My Name is Al’ie Sheath, a Jedi General in the Clone Wars…<br>  …and this is my Battlefield Journal |
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Post by TheQ on Apr 19, 2005 7:46:22 GMT -5
Nice collection of SW sets. My advice would be to use other kind of the background. It looks pretty plain as it is now.
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Post by Jamit on Apr 19, 2005 7:49:45 GMT -5
I love the Clone Wars so I look forward to the next part. Also, in your space battle I think the ships are to close together, but I did enjoy reading it. Would it be fine if we put it up at are home page? -Jamit  |
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Post by Thies on Apr 19, 2005 9:04:51 GMT -5
I love the Clone Wars so I look forward to the next part. Also, in your space battle I think the ships are to close together, but I did enjoy reading it. Would it be fine if we put it up at are home page? -Jamit Yes, that would be fine. I do need to come up with a better background, but I cant find a good place in my house. Never the less, I'll keep looking. Exspect another update today |
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Post by Thies on Apr 19, 2005 11:46:55 GMT -5
Issue 2 Day 01  Things have been going according to plan  But I sense that that is going to change very soon  Officer Blank: We don’t have enough troops to have a full on assault. We need more troops Sheath: What if we send a team of Commandos to fight them with Gorilla Tactics. We could pick off there forces one by one Blank: No, there are too many of them. It would never work  Sheath: Very well, send for a team of ARC Troopers and Clone Commanders, we will need there tactics to win this fight  Blank: Even with there support we will not have enough fire power…<br>  …to even put a dent in there forces  Sheath: Don’t worry, we will think of something to save this planet  Commander Derrick: Sir, a team of enemy scouts is heading towards our camp Blank: they will give away our position Derrick: Should we attack sir  Sheath: No, I will fly out and confront them myself  Droid: Enemy units on scanner  Sheath: This should be a nice test for my Lightsaber     Sheath: That’s the last of them  Sheath: Now to get back to…<br>Clone Over Radio: Sir……under attack…..to many of them…Agghhhhhhh…… Sheath: No, this was just a diversion |
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Post by Jamit on Apr 19, 2005 17:13:39 GMT -5
Looks good. You never gave a planet name.  What will the commados be like? -Jamit  |
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Post by Thies on Apr 19, 2005 17:41:44 GMT -5
Looks good. You never gave a planet name. What will the commados be like? -Jamit There will not be any Commandos, but there will be some Clone Commanders and ARC Troopers which operate a lot like Commandos, but in larger groups. They will be Clones with assorted weapons and differant bodies. A few of them will be wearing your Decals (If you dont mind that is). I will of course give you credit for the decals  |
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Post by Jamit on Apr 19, 2005 18:20:37 GMT -5
There will not be any Commandos, but there will be some Clone Commanders and ARC Troopers which operate a lot like Commandos, but in larger groups. They will be Clones with assorted weapons and differant bodies. A few of them will be wearing you Decals (If you dont mind that is). I will of course give you credit for the decals No, I don't mind at all. Infact, the more people using them, the better. -Jamit |
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Post by Thies on Apr 19, 2005 19:54:02 GMT -5
 This is what they look like |
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Post by Jamit on Apr 19, 2005 20:28:00 GMT -5
WOW! Those look good. -Jamit  |
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Post by Thies on Apr 19, 2005 20:55:04 GMT -5
WOW! Those look good. -Jamit Thank you, thank you very much |
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Post by Thies on Apr 21, 2005 17:00:46 GMT -5
Sorry for Double posting...
I think I might get a new issue up tonight...or tomorrow night. I'm pretty busy
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Post by Thies on Apr 24, 2005 16:09:56 GMT -5
Issue 3  By the time I got back, everything was gone Sheath: No, I’m too late  Among the dead were old friends…<br>Sheath: Blank, who did this to you? Blank: It….was……aghhhh…<br>  Later…<br>Commander Derrick: Sir, you’re back. What took you so long? Sheath: Hailfire Droids shot down my fighter. I had to walk. How many troops are left?  Derrick: Only the ones that stand behind you And that’s how I met the soldiers who would become known as Doom Platoon  First was Commander Maroon, a by the books tough soldier…<br>Maroon: Ready to take the shot sir …Next was Crosswire, the Technician that preferred to reprogram droids instead of shooting them…<br>Crosswire: Now, were did I put my computer. Oh well, I can build another one in…ohhh. About 5 minutes  …Then came Doc, a bit of a nut who preferred to chop of limbs instead of stitching them back together…<br>Doc: Pain makes one strong …and last came Crasher, the pilot who sometimes thinks it easier to crash a ship then to land it. Crasher: Hey sir, I’m more than your average Pilot. I can even fly stick.  Sheath: Now what? Derrick: We were able to save one transport…<br>  …we need to return to Republic Space to find help. Sheath: No, we are staying here to stop the Separatists in their tracks. If they find what ever there looking for on this planet, the war might be over. Derrick: But…<br>Sheath: That’s an order Derrick: Yes sir. Every one to the ship  Crasher: I call driver seat. Maroon: Of course you get driver seat, you’re the only one who can drive this thing Crosswire; Just try to keep her in one piece, it took me forever to fix this thing up so it can fly Crasher: I don’t make promises  Crasher: This is your pilot saying…<br>  ..hold onto your blaster because we are leaving this graveyard  Meanwhile…<br>Battle Droid: Sir, our spies tell us that the Republic Forces are on there way. Grievous: Send my apprentice to meet them |
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Post by Jamit on Apr 25, 2005 11:04:19 GMT -5
Looking very good.  -Jamit |
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Post by Nannan on May 5, 2005 18:52:30 GMT -5
You got a great story going there, classic star wars stuff. One thing, it's guerrilla warfare not "gorilla" warfare . |
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Post by Sz_2cool4u2b on May 15, 2005 12:59:39 GMT -5
Man, those were cool. Clone Wars stuff is always nice. |
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Post by TiMaJ on May 28, 2005 20:11:04 GMT -5
love these comics update soon plz
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Post by Jamit on Jun 7, 2005 20:04:56 GMT -5
Will these ever be finnished? I really liked 'em.
-Jamit
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Post by masterchef601 on Aug 5, 2005 8:37:48 GMT -5
I really hope you finish this
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Post by Thies on Aug 6, 2005 22:10:47 GMT -5
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