Teleporter

[Steven329]

I know I mest up with my copyright.

Were would you go?
Some people might look at it and say "A Time Machine!" It not a time machine it actually a teleporter. The worlds first one also. Invented in 2006 A.H.D (After Human Death) (Well The humans only survived like how humans were created by God.) Anyways back to this MOC. This machine is save to use. you could now travel all over the planet.

BTW,This is for my W.A.R. comic but it will only be seen in the background.

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[TheQ]

Lets see..

My thoughts:

#1: You need to clean up the backgroud and make the pictures smaller. Seriously, I use pictures THIRD of that size and they work very well.

#2: Even thought you use it as a background creation, it needs more attention. I am sorry, but this creation is much worse than your creations normally are. It need work, very much of it.

#3: "What is that thing?"

[Jamit]

The front does not look all bad to me, however the back is not good. As TheQ said, it needs work.

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[Steven329]

theq said:

Lets see..

My thoughts:

#1: You need to clean up the backgroud and make the pictures smaller. Seriously, I use pictures THIRD of that size and they work very well.

#2: Even thought you use it as a background creation, it needs more attention. I am sorry, but this creation is much worse than your creations normally are. It need work, very much of it.

#3: "What is that thing?"

The Design was made out of the Time Machine from well The Time Machine. I made it because It was a Dream Machine Meaning that a teleporter is a Sci-Fi Machine that doesn't exist yet. Every Detail is there for a reason.