Piercer

[dyip_90]

For teh contest...

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All criticism permitted..

[ThePlasticJedi]

It looks ok, but there is a lot of room for improvement. I really don't like the way that you attached the engines, I think this MOC needs a little more girth on the bottom. It just doesn't look right...

TPJ

[back2murder]

that realy looks nice. i agree about the girth thing. but annyway. i REALY like it. if i needed a ship i would like that one! 9/10

[TheQ]

Heh, when I first saw this I immediately thought of my old MOC. Anyway, about this creation.

Tiles

I don't really know if the tiles work in this creation. I can't say "NO", since it smoothes the ship very much and work very well, but I can't say "YES", since tiles are pretty random. In your place, I would decide to use one color as the "highlight color" and streamline the ship by making some horizontal lines via the highlight colored tiles. It would help to give more lenght to the creation and "smooth" it more.

Also, you should think twice where you put the grille tiles. They don't work very well clustered everywhere

Cockpit area

IMHO, best part of the MOC. The slight "flattening" works well. But does the screen move at all or do you need to take the whole part away just to get access to the inside?

Other parts

Motors are bit undetailed but work, the shape is pretty good (show us the under parts) but the backgroud! Denny, you have to clean up the background. You know, use a white blanket or similar.

-Q

[Jamit]

I guess this is a little bit late. But better then never.

The background in two of the pictures are a mess. Try to clean it up. And that criticism is the only criticism I can find about something that is your fault. I see that you use old gray and new gray in this MOC. But I'm assuming you had no choice in that matter.

Something I would like to see you do is stick a minifig in the cockpit while you take the pictures. Just to be sure a minifig would fit.

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