My fist publised mocs

fuzzy
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My fist publised mocs Feb 15, 2006 21:03:21 GMT -5

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Post by fuzzy on Feb 15, 2006 21:03:21 GMT -5

my new mocs enjoy

www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/blaktop2.jpg
www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/blksmth.jpg
www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/cart.jpg
www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/flechtop.jpg
www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/flecthshop.jpg
www.brickshelf.com/gallery/fuzzonan/newstuff/war/tank.jpg

surry bot the tank...fuzzy

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My fist publised mocs Feb 15, 2006 21:58:08 GMT -5

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Post by Jamit on Feb 15, 2006 21:58:08 GMT -5

First of all, these are very good MOCs. I am going to say bad things about them, but only to try and help you make better ones. Again, these are OK MOCs.

The black smith is most likely your best MOC. Its got a neat design. One thing I would change is the bush on the right in the front. Take it away.

What can I say about a castle cart that does not have wagon wheels? It was a good try but sadly it looks like your lack of bricks kept this from being an OK MOC.

Can I ask what a "flecth shop" is?

Your tank needs some kind of way to move around. Wheels or something...

I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine...

You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you!
~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

Steven329 The Almighty reepblue[M:289] Posts: 525	My fist publised mocs Feb 15, 2006 22:03:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Steven329 on Feb 15, 2006 22:03:51 GMT -5 "Your tank needs some kind of way to move around. Wheels or something..." It can have Hover Pads. Anyway nice MOCs but do a little better. Same Thing as Jamit sad.
	a tree1026 (6:41:53 PM): you're such a responsible member New Lego Net needs active members badly then before!

fuzzy Qualified member Secret Random Man[M:25] Posts: 26	My fist publised mocs Feb 16, 2006 17:20:04 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by fuzzy on Feb 16, 2006 17:20:04 GMT -5 those are hover pads and the fleth shop is a flechers shop

Jamit Administrator [M:0] Posts: 2,142	My fist publised mocs Feb 16, 2006 21:27:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jamit on Feb 16, 2006 21:27:00 GMT -5 Well then it would be nice if you had made that clearer to us. Taken some more pictures or something. Are these the first MOCs that you have put up onto the world wide web?
	I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine... You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you! ~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

fuzzy Qualified member Secret Random Man[M:25] Posts: 26	My fist publised mocs Feb 18, 2006 13:15:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by fuzzy on Feb 18, 2006 13:15:16 GMT -5 no. 3rd.

Post by fuzzy on Feb 15, 2006 21:03:21 GMT -5

Post by Jamit on Feb 15, 2006 21:58:08 GMT -5

Post by Steven329 on Feb 15, 2006 22:03:51 GMT -5

Post by fuzzy on Feb 16, 2006 17:20:04 GMT -5

Post by Jamit on Feb 16, 2006 21:27:00 GMT -5

Post by fuzzy on Feb 18, 2006 13:15:16 GMT -5