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Post by dyip_90 on Jun 15, 2005 15:31:30 GMT -5
I have created a bus, based off of these two: Pic OnePic TwoThis bus is called an Orion V, and is built by Orion Bus INdustries of Mississauga. Without further ado, here is the bus! Pic OnePic TwoPic ThreePic FourTell me what you think! I will also accept sayings like "this moc is horrible". |
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Post by LordLlamo on Jun 15, 2005 15:35:50 GMT -5
i like the MOC Dyip, but it seems a little off-scale, maybe a bit too small. i also wanted to know how many minifigs it holds, including the driver. i really like the SNOT bricks and hatches on top, but the body seems to close to the ground and the wheels are a bit to big for the bus. also, the yellow hubcaps dont do much for me either. cool GO stickers too. overall: 8.5 outa 10. nice job  |
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Post by 17Godzilla on Jun 15, 2005 15:37:19 GMT -5
I like it! Looks alot like the orginal. The first piccy is funny with the people lining up  |
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Post by LordLlamo on Jun 15, 2005 15:42:21 GMT -5
you should make a little bus stop and a bench for them to sit. maybe put one of our fan fiction posters as a movie poster for the bus stop.
just an idea,
Liam
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Post by SquirKim on Jun 15, 2005 22:14:13 GMT -5
It looks a lot like the original i must say. But i agree with LordLlamo, it does look too close to the ground. I like your details with the people lining up, the GO stickers and the bus number on the side above the door and the hatches on the roof. The SNOT bricks give it a smooth look, which is nice. Really nice job. 9/10
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Post by Jamit on Jun 16, 2005 18:45:36 GMT -5
This is probably your best MOC yet Dyip.
The only thing that a see wrong is the door.
[Jamit}======
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Post by goldendrawer on Jul 7, 2005 10:53:15 GMT -5
kewl bus dude ;D
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Post by dyip_90 on Jul 20, 2005 20:47:09 GMT -5
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Post by Nannan on Jul 21, 2005 9:44:25 GMT -5
It's good, but use some slopes along the edges to create some killer curves that will take away the current "blockish" look.
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Post by dyip_90 on Dec 18, 2005 14:18:42 GMT -5
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Post by Nannan on Dec 18, 2005 15:03:49 GMT -5
Very smooth bro, you've tiled the top, now finish the interior. And what did I say about the wheel socket? Make them rounder with inverted slopes or arches.
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+7 for the booty job
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Post by Steven329 on Dec 19, 2005 6:57:43 GMT -5
Rating rate5
Comments Dyip, I like what you did here. this bus has a lot of detail. I hope you have something to take care of the LYW.(Large Yellow Weels.)
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Post by dyip_90 on Dec 19, 2005 17:56:45 GMT -5
Yeah, definitely.
Need to add the mirror too.
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Post by Paddy <3 Morphosis on Dec 20, 2005 3:13:49 GMT -5
Before fixing anything else, fix the wheel wells.
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Post by dyip_90 on Dec 20, 2005 8:10:49 GMT -5
Definitely.
I need to go to the closest Pick-a-Brick from ehre, even though it's about 45 mins away...
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Post by Nannan on Dec 20, 2005 22:31:03 GMT -5
Only 45 mins away? You're so spoiled.
When I was your age, I had to walk ten miles to get to a PaB...
...barefoot...
...in three feet of snow...
...uphill...
...both ways...
You cannot feel my pain unless you've heard the Cosby.
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