The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2!

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 22, 2005 18:13:55 GMT -5

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Here it is!

PART 2: WAR; Of Civillizations and of two people

Andrew Farrel: Master...

Neo laughs

Neo: Its not like im God or something, so get up General.

Andrew: Of Course

Neo: So anyway, whats on your mind?

Andrew: Master, do you think its wise to let wookies guard Battery Island on Sullust?

Neo: Yes, The wookies are wise, I think they can defend it well.

Andrew: Of course, Master.

MEANWHILE, In the Imperial Flagship Hanger.

Emperor Darcious(Black): Send in the carrier boats

High Commander(Red): Yes, meanwhile, I will be training on Barell 2.

Darcious: Good....

LATER, On Battery Island

Wookie On Speeder: Grrharh! (See anything?)

Wookie On Gun: Rarha! (No..wait..yes)

Wookie on speeder: Grrh! Rarh! (Quickly, fire the artillery)

Wookie On gun: GHRRRAR! (Its too close! Go to the dock)

The Speeder Wookie speeds to the dock

Wookie On Speeder: Grugha! (Uh oh!)

He speeds back to the island.

The Imperials Land.

Commander: GO GO GO!

The troopers run to the island.

SUDDENLY, A carrier flys over

Pilot: Heres your present!

An odd metal object falls from the carrier and lands.

The object unfolds....it is a walker!

Trooper: JUMP!

Only two make it.

The walker turret turns down and fires

The dead troopers bodies float up

BACK on Neoterra

Trooper: We need air support!

Pilot: Someone call me?

Trooper: Good, we have air support!

As the Neoterran fighter flies around, The Earth fighter has located it and gone in for the kill....

The Infantry trooper looks at the wing parts of the fighter

Trooper: Uh oh.

Trooper: RUN!

They attempted to run, but no one made it.

Scout Soldier: Kills confirmed.

MEANWHILE, back on Earth...

Neo: Time to engage the high commander....

He walks up the ramp to his ship and takes off

Neo flips a switch, and engages slipspace.

Slipspace ends

Neo: Theres the planet...

Neo lands. gets out, and the high commander is already there

High Commander: Exelor..what a suprise the see you here.

Neo jumps at him...

..And the High Commander blocks it, they start dueling

Neo shoots his saber under, slices through armor, and cuts his knee strait through

Neo stabs him in the chest, he is in critical condition

Neo: Darcious is next...

He walks back to his ship, and heads for Earth

END

Stay tuned for part 3!

Last Edit: May 22, 2005 18:16:00 GMT -5 by AssCake

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 23, 2005 14:00:52 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on May 23, 2005 14:00:52 GMT -5 Comments?

Jamit Administrator [M:0] Posts: 2,142	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 23, 2005 15:32:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jamit on May 23, 2005 15:32:43 GMT -5 Its pretty good. However, I suggest you use clear peices in stead of your hand. -Jamit
	I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine... You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you! ~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 23, 2005 16:04:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on May 23, 2005 16:04:15 GMT -5 I dont know where they went

Jamit Administrator [M:0] Posts: 2,142	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 24, 2005 19:24:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jamit on May 24, 2005 19:24:48 GMT -5 Find them. -Jamit
	I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine... You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you! ~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 25, 2005 17:23:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on May 25, 2005 17:23:53 GMT -5 I made a small tool, the top 2 are clear, the others are good.

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 27, 2005 20:02:04 GMT -5

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Post by Jamit on May 27, 2005 20:02:04 GMT -5

Here's something else I suggest, try and have stronger color scemes. On this ships wing there are 4 colors. Try and make it 1 or 2. If you don't have alot of bricks I under stand.

-Jamit

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I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine...

You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you!
~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

Paddy <3 Morphosis Council Member [M:18] Posts: 369	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 28, 2005 18:32:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Paddy <3 Morphosis on May 28, 2005 18:32:13 GMT -5 I think I've gone blind from all the random colors.

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 30, 2005 14:35:49 GMT -5

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Post by AssCake on May 30, 2005 14:35:49 GMT -5

admin said:

Here's something else I suggest, try and have stronger color scemes. On this ships wing there are 4 colors. Try and make it 1 or 2. If you don't have alot of bricks I under stand.

-Jamit

Edit I have 1,000 posts!

I have alot of bricks damn it! Its not like they are all the same damn color!

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! May 31, 2005 2:40:37 GMT -5

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Post by TheQ on May 31, 2005 2:40:37 GMT -5

Hey, no-one ment to hurt you, Neo. It is just that usually random colors make the MOC look much worse than it is. The ship that Jamit linked for us is good example of you skills getting better. While there is still 4 colors they are in good order. For example, removing those green plates and changing them to other kind makes the MOC much nicer to view.

Modelling LEGO MOC is not just about the colors or the model itself, it is the compination.

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TheQ - Banned from the planet Earth says:
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Yes, indeed. "O Great and Worthy Master of the Brick" is how I like to be referred to.

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 1, 2005 14:50:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on Jun 1, 2005 14:50:10 GMT -5 Right now, I have a walker, Grey and blue. Ive had the skill all along, I just didnt want to put color first instead of what it looks like.

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 1, 2005 14:58:41 GMT -5

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Post by Jamit on Jun 1, 2005 14:58:41 GMT -5

neoexelor said:

Right now, I have a walker, Grey and blue. Ive had the skill all along, I just didnt want to put color first instead of what it looks like.

Well it would look better not being multi-color. 8-)

-Jamit

I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine...

You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you!
~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

Jamit Administrator [M:0] Posts: 2,142	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 2, 2005 14:21:05 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Jamit on Jun 2, 2005 14:21:05 GMT -5 When is part 3 coming out? -Jamit
	I gave you my music made your song take wing. And now, how you've repaid me, denied me and betrayed me. He was bound to love you when he heard you sing, Christine... You will curse the day you did not do all that the Phantom asked of you! ~Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 2, 2005 16:53:31 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on Jun 2, 2005 16:53:31 GMT -5 When Im A. Done Shooting B. Done uploading pics to my computer, and taking more photos

J1A3L5 Council Member SNOT fixes everything[M:299] Posts: 685	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 3, 2005 21:09:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by J1A3L5 on Jun 3, 2005 21:09:55 GMT -5 Think hippie. -John "J1A3L5" Langrish who finds only one out of every several hundred multicolour models worthwhile.
	LEGO® Elements are not "legos" or any other equally uninformed term.

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 4, 2005 8:18:06 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on Jun 4, 2005 8:18:06 GMT -5 Ok, im done shooting and I posted that teaser. LOL Most of my LEGOS are better than that! Hahaha!

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 4, 2005 8:18:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on Jun 4, 2005 8:18:57 GMT -5 REPORT: They are all now on my computer! Ready for Photobucketing!

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The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 4, 2005 22:10:56 GMT -5

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neoexelor said:

LOL Most of my LEGOS are better than that! Hahaha!

To each his own.

Just remember, Ley is quite a fine builder...

...I'd like to see you try to get your head around that mind-bending SNOT!

-John "J1A3L5" Langrish.

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LEGO® Elements are not "legos" or any other equally uninformed term.

AssCake Guru Beatlemania [M:-29] Posts: 222	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 5, 2005 8:40:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AssCake on Jun 5, 2005 8:40:55 GMT -5 What was that suppost to be, the bottom one?

J1A3L5 Council Member SNOT fixes everything[M:299] Posts: 685	The Long Awaited War Of The Worlds Part 2! Jun 5, 2005 13:34:22 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by J1A3L5 on Jun 5, 2005 13:34:22 GMT -5 The internal workings of the ship. -John "J1A3L5" Langrish.
	LEGO® Elements are not "legos" or any other equally uninformed term.

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