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Post by hellblade on May 16, 2005 12:33:58 GMT -5
Edward stood on the brig of the Fearless; it was a captured navy vessel—a destroyer, with enough cannons to blast any trade vessel out of the water. A large wave of water grabbed several men near Edward and sent them over board, lukily the ropes attached to them held together and they hauled them selves up on deck. The captains first-mate whispered in Captain Robinsons ear “We need to lower the sails, if we don’t the masts will just snap off. “OK” the captain whispered back, and then bellowed, “Lower the sails.” Edward began to climb up the mast and he almost slipped once when a large wave came and splashed over him wetting the railings in front of him, making the journey to the top ever more difficult. He climbed up and began pulling the sails up as the people on the ground pulled ropes
^^^ its just a preview what do ya think
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Post by Nannan on May 16, 2005 17:43:25 GMT -5
It's good, since everyone else makes fan fics about space adventures. Show some pics if you have them
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