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Post by Jamit on Apr 18, 2005 7:55:21 GMT -5
During the Battle of CoruscantIn an etempt to destroy the Techno Union, two Jedi are sent to the planet Skako to capture Wat Tambor. However, someone or something is there to mess up there plans.... Jack: This is the last one.... Jack: Got 'em! Jack: Master, I have destroyed the separatists fleet. However, I am our last ship. Master An'she: Hurry back now, I fear the droid army will attack. Jack: Yes master. Later... Jack: Were is every one? Master An'she: Jack! Jack: I'm coming master. Grenade Trooper: Beep, beep, boom! Master An'she: You ready? Jack: I always am. .... .... .... .... Master An'she: Very good, Padawan. Jack: How were you defeated like this? Master An'she: Superior tactics. It is my fear we are facing a general almost as cunning as General Grievous. Jack: We should call Coruscant for more troops. Master An'she: Master Windu, we need more troops. Master Windu: We are being attack here. I can not spare many troops. But I can send you a small commando team. Master An'she: Thank you, master. To be continued....
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Post by Thies on Apr 18, 2005 18:28:27 GMT -5
Very nice, I like how you did the Vulture droid exploding in the begining
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Post by TheQ on Apr 19, 2005 7:43:38 GMT -5
Nice and simple. Try making more detailed backgrounds. They work better that these plain plate.
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Post by Jamit on Apr 23, 2005 15:42:09 GMT -5
Here is part two: The next day....Master An'she: Almost got this guy fixed.... Master An'she: Looks like our renforcments are here.... Commander Joe: Master An'she, we were sent here by Master Windu to assist you in capturing Wat Tambor and destroying the droid factories. Master An'she: Very good. When my Padawan, Jack comes back from his reconasense mission we can make plans. Master An'she: Here he is.... Commander Joe: What do you think we are, blind? Master An'she: Umm, maybe. Commander Joe: Would you just shout up! Jack: I've completed my mission, master. Master An'she: Very good, what did you learn? Jack: The separatists have 1,300 droids with more coming every day. Master An'she: Hmm, what do you say we do, Commander? Commander Joe: I say that we capture a fort in the City and get our technician to rig a turrent to fire at the droids. Master An'she: Sounds good. Jack: Lets go!
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Post by Thies on Apr 23, 2005 18:53:36 GMT -5
Looks good. I got to get back to working on my comic
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Post by Jamit on Apr 23, 2005 20:24:03 GMT -5
Looks good. I got to get back to working on my comic Yes, you do. I was really liking your comics.... -Jamit
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Post by Thies on Apr 23, 2005 21:02:19 GMT -5
I noticed that the troopers that are lying on the ground dead are really storm troopers. Why is that?
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Post by Jamit on Apr 23, 2005 21:15:25 GMT -5
I noticed that the troopers that are lying on the ground dead are really storm troopers. Why is that? Because I don't have clones. Thats why there on there face. -Jamit
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Post by back2murder on Apr 30, 2005 4:24:43 GMT -5
Woowha nice comics!! is it going to be continuead??
GR b2m
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Post by Jamit on Apr 30, 2005 6:55:27 GMT -5
Woowha nice comics!! is it going to be continuead?? GR b2m Yes they will be, I hope to add the next bit Monday. -Jamit
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Post by CrustaceanFreak on May 1, 2005 17:36:20 GMT -5
Pretty cooL! The photo quality is great.
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Post by Jamit on May 2, 2005 20:34:53 GMT -5
PART IIIA hour later... Jack: Hey guys! I found something that might help us. Master An'she: What is it? Jack: A broken down TX-130 Tank. Master An'she: Well if its broken down then it's no good. Jack: I think we can fix it with the help of that R2 unit. Commander Joe: It's worth a try. R2-Y8: Wee-beep! Jack: Do you think it can be fixed? Commander Joe: Of course, just give us an hour.... *With that the Clone and R2-Y8 get to work* Commander Joe: Why is there a LEGO Sports sign? Master An'she: Beyond me. *In less then an hour...* Jack: Let's go kick some droid but! Master An'she: Don't be rude, young one. *Jack rolls his eyes* Tune it next time for the last episode. -Jamit
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Post by back2murder on May 3, 2005 2:20:34 GMT -5
the last one already!! to bad :S i realy like them!
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Post by Thies on May 3, 2005 6:51:02 GMT -5
The end is drawing near I fear
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Post by Jamit on May 3, 2005 14:52:50 GMT -5
The end is drawing near I fear Yes, it is. And it will be the best of all the parts. -Jamit
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Post by back2murder on May 5, 2005 4:54:42 GMT -5
Yes, it is. And it will be the best of all the parts. -Jamit well that sounds good. still to bad it is the last part GR b2m
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Post by Jamit on May 5, 2005 20:58:03 GMT -5
Well I think you will all like what is replacing it. -Jamit
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Post by back2murder on May 6, 2005 2:34:19 GMT -5
Well I think you will all like what is replacing it. -Jamit yeah i saw looks good! but what is mickey doing there?? GR mt
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Post by Jamit on May 6, 2005 6:11:27 GMT -5
yeah i saw looks good! but what is mickey doing there?? GR mt Just for fun, of course. -Jamit
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Post by back2murder on May 6, 2005 9:33:42 GMT -5
Just for fun, of course. -Jamit good i was already wondering GR b2m
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